There was once a great family of raccoons in a forest,
next to a river. One day, a hyperactive pup has born.
“Come to see him, he is so cute!” said proudly the
raccoons mother. All the uncles, grandparents and cousins of the raccoon came
inside the burrow to see the newborn member of the family. The parents were
proudly leading the group, they entered their home… And found the bed empty.
“Where is it?” asked all the relatives. The parents
had no idea, but suddenly they saw their child come out of the closet. Everyone
laughed and said the kid was clever, cute, smart and adventurer. They had a
snack all together, and someone asked: “Any ideas for a name?”
All of the raccoons in there had some suggestions. “Smarty!”
“Furry!” “Killer!” “Sam!” “How about an explorer´s name?” suggested Blackypaws,
one of the cousins. “Yes, an explorer´s name would be quite appropriate!”
Agreed his mom. So everyone started thinking about names. “Christopher Columbus!”
“Francis Drake” “Robinson Crusoe” “Marco Polo” “Alexander!” “How about LaSalle?”
suggested the granddad, an old raccoon with almost white fur and blurry eyes. “I
studied him at school when I was little, and he definitely seems like a great
explorer with exactly the same personality as your child.” “Yes, that name
suits perfectly!” Everyone agreed. “Welcome, LaSalle!”
So LaSalle grew like any other little raccoon. He was
a mischievous, playful and jovial little raccoon. He was always exploring, but
his first proper adventure was still a child. He decided he wanted to cross the
river. This might sound like a rather easy and quick thing to do, but the river
near the forest in which the raccoons lived was a fierce river with turbulent
waters, with deep, shallow areas and a great current capable of carrying a
small, innocent raccoon to its demise. But that wouldn´t stop outrageous
LaSalle. He really wanted to explore that area, but it was dangerous.
If you have read the legend about Liza, then you would
know that Liza also crossed a harsh river when she was young, but LaSalle was
much smaller and younger than the panda alpha, so it was a perilous expedition.
But LaSalle soon was determined to cross the river. So one day he told
Stripedpelt, his best friend, that he wanted to cross to the other side. “You
see, Stripedpelt, I really want to explore that area. I just know it will be
awesome.” “Oh, but LaSalle, answered Stripedpelt, worried. “It would be so
dangerous. What if you fall down the waterfall?” “Don´t be such a wimp. I am
going to cross the river and that´s that, even if it is the last thing I do. I
must start training right now. When the time comes, I must be able to swim
quickly against the current, and I also need to be able to cling to a branch if
I am going to fall. I have to be able to hold my breath as much time as possible
underwater, and I have to be well prepared to explore that unknown area.”
So LaSalle practiced his swimming every day in the
pond, until he could swim faster and for much more time than any other of his
friends. He practiced leaping onto branches, he learnt how to hold his breath
for ages underwater, and he leaped, crouched, hopped and ran to be prepared to explore
the are on the other side of the river under any circumstances. Soon he was the
quietest, strongest and fastest raccoon in the family. And one day, he decided
he was ready.
LaSalle woke up Early that day. He did some stretching
exercises, and then put one paw in the river, then another one, and then he
dived in. It was like being put into a blender.
The rest coming soon.
Nice! It was awesome besides some grammer mistakes!!
ReplyDeleteI don't believe MCB lives here in the U.S. I think Spain...?
DeleteI can't read that much... But I can read a 600 page book in a week. *sigh* I have no thoughts on it... Sorry MCB, just can't do it. You could also call me lazy though. c: I'm sure it's great though, seeings as you're an awesome writer!
Correct, I live in Spain! And also, sorry it seemed long, I put it twice because of a mistake... Just fixed it, hope you can read it now!
DeleteLaSelle is a girl Alpha.
ReplyDeleteI wasnt really sure... Probably AJHQ will say it in the next update!
Delete@Mister
DeleteJust wanted to let you know! My mom is named LaSelle, so I figured it was a girl :)
Cheers!
~Springclaw
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